The Fall

At the moment of impact

My movement had rusted

I became stiff

Unless in every sense

It was the way the light hit

That allowed me to see

Into the abyss created

By my unconscious mind

Unaware of how far I had drifted

The darkness set in

Marinating in my body

I felt hollow

And as the abyss began to close

I was left inside

Falling for all eternity 

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[Chaos_Collector]

I like the fact that I could relate to this. I've felt like I've experienced a variation of this poem to a great extent. You've evinced emotions quite well in poem. My favorite part was the ending "And as the abyss began to close
I was left inside
Falling for all eternity" It really stuck to my heart. Well done