GIRL

its about how pure and important girls are..

"GIRL"
She is a mother, a sister, a wife,
A friend she is, throughout her life..
She cares for every person around,
the deepest of wounds can be cured, 
just by her comforting sound...

Amidst the group of strangers large,
she struggles to create her identity..
She can provide the toughest bout,
because weakness never is her entity...

She loves to cook, to sing and dance...
She requires her freedom, her opportunity & her chance...
She can surpass the greatest of fears,
Still teddies and barbies are always her dears..

She is so innocent, the unblemished one,
like every other person, she loves to have fun..
Her dreams are big, her ambitions are high..
like a free bird she wishes to fly...


She is brave enough to bear a heart break,
sometimes says sorry even if not her mistake..
More than her ego, are people she cares for,
Her family remains Gud, is what she keeps praying for...

" Still, at every moment, her feelings are played with,
A woman is always small, we need to end this ruthless myth
She requires utmost care and respect she deserves,
WE promise that we'll protect her and dignity we'll preserve.." 

Reviews

[Shaylynn H.]

To make this easier I'm going to review based on this outline.
General flow: I liked the flow of this poem, it's well written and I didn't run into any issues where I got lost and had trouble finding my way back to the topic.

Formatting: Your usage of the ellipsis (...) seems rather excessive in this poem, I believe it can be replaced by the dash (-) which serves the same purpose but looks more professional.

Spelling/Grammar: Some words that are capitalized that shouldn't be. Is "Gud" near the end supposed to be the word good?

Emotion it brought out: While I like how you play the woman off as some gentle creature, I find often times women can be quite vindictive and mean - this is coming from a girl who has seen it herself.

Concerns: No real concerns about the poem besides what is mentioned above

Additional comments: Over all it is a good concept and isn't hard to read, so you get props for that.