I'm Breaking

"All those times I let you win
I won't say you were so mean

Its hurting and burning
and I, now I'm breaking

If you hurt me, you break me
I should've hate you so badly

I'm trying, not working
and I, now I'm breaking"

Reviews

[writ rajat]

Just needed restructuring otherwise it is great

[Mayank Chaudhari]

Right... I also think it could be better.