In Some Hearts

A poem that may open people's eyes to see how horrible human could be.

Some of them carry it with high pride

The gun in arms feels nothing but right

Some of them want it to stop

But no mercy is what they have been taught  

 

Some of them carry the burden on their shoulders

They carry the fears when their world gets darker

And some of them cannot move their legs to run

All they can do is beg to be helped by someone

  

Smoke stain the fresh air

Fire burns with nothing to spare

While gunshots are always heard everytime

The grudge will not be healed by the time

Some would just cry beneath the ruins

Some would throw party after winning

Some would keep the hatred for the rest of life

And some would forget what they've done in life

Author's Note

first poem. please give me notes about the poem, I would be very happy to recieve some encouraging critics :)

Reviews

[Ashwin Thakur]

It doesnt matter what do you do in your whole life
It doesnt matter someone gives you respect or not
You have to stay in this world where your stature depends
And do you know what does that create when you understand you cant go further
It creates a monster awakens the devil in you
But when you refuse to accept the reality and your dreams start to seep in
Thats when humans makes themselves legends.
Beautiful poem:):):).