naive.

I'd like to think

I took you from that

grown woman who

thought you loved her

but I'm not a naive little

teenager

Or that you'll

never meet another

like me

but I'm not a naive

little teenager

Maybe I will always 

leave you wanting

more

but I'm not a naive

little teenager

I'm 18 and

you're older

and you'll miss

me without even

knowing me

but

I'm not a

naive little teenager.

Author's Note

like...yeah bae I'm 18...but who you 'gon meet like me?

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

you are certainly not a naive little teenager, but i guess a lot of people under-estimate you? i suffer the same. as the youngest of four with a baby face people don't take me seriously.
the frustration of not being seen for who you really are is felt in this verse. but there is a bit of wry humour in it too. i can almost see you roll your eyes as you pen this.
rest assured, i know you are much wiser beyond your years, most older people have never outgrown their childishness. such is the sad reality of life. hope you keep your chin up and fight for what you deserve.

[cain_notfound]

I always love how selfish you are and in your words "bratty" you can be when it comes to love.

I feel like, in the most non-weirdest way possible, you'd write like...brilliant erotica.

The best line, I feel, is "Or that I will always // leave you wanting // more" really sums up the fact that you don't believe you're naive but you are confident and selfish (as you should be) enough to say that he'll never be able to get enough of you.

always amazing work, Maya.

[maya_online]

thank you so much !

lol I am a brat, you might know best didn't I get mad at you for...what did you do??

[cain_notfound]

oh I got another tattoo and then you asked me where all my tattoos were and I mention I have one...down there so you were upset that I had so many lmao

I remember you said specifically "so you think you're a thug now"