bed rot

bed rot

A Poem by maya_online
"

I don't even want to move, I don't ever want to move.

"
bed rot
rot
rot
I'll stay here
and lay here
until it's the end
of my days, here


because the outside
world
is scary
and I'm feeling
very very
unsure of my 
surroundings
so I'll lay here
where the pillow
is soft
and the sheets
are warm
and everything is
arms length
bed rot
rot 
rot


I can't remember
the last time
I got up
but I need to
refill my
water cup
I guess one
day I'll go
walk that mile
but for now, I 
think I'll lay here
for a while.

© 2024 maya_online


Author's Note

maya_online
Since its been break, I feel like I've just been laying in my bed, and I haven't written in a minute so...

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I had to look up what the definition of bed rot was and you completely summed it up but on more of the negative side of rotting in your bed for ages.

The line " I can't remember the last time I got up" and "I think I'll lay here for a while" are beautiful, and I find when you repeat you always repeat three times, and it works for you every time, I've missed you, I won't lie, since I know your internet has been out, but you always come back with something better, great work, princess.

Posted 15 Hours Ago


maya_online

15 Hours Ago

yeah, like I hate and love bed rotting.

thank you for your review, sugarcane !
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Added on November 24, 2024
Last Updated on November 24, 2024
Tags: melancholy, sad, death, love, attachment, maya_online

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maya_online

here in, GA



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