I love you more with each passing day.

but maybe I shouldn't

I love you more with each passing day

but as each day passes

my love grows

uncontrollably 

until the depths of my soul

become a bottomless pit

because no one should

love you more with each passing day

but no day can pass

as I wonder

if you feel the same

so I expand

and expand for

you more with each passing day

but the more I do

the less I know

because you

pull, pull, pull

away and I'm afraid

because if I love you

any

more with each passing day

I'll forget to love someone

just as important

and someone who needs it just as much

because I loved you

with each passing day.

Author's Note

https://voca.ro/14MEiB5fsbAr

Hope that it was as frantic as I wanted to make it, getting rid of the words slowly is showing the confusion of the writer as his love isn't being reciprocated but he can't control how much he loves the other person. The last bit can be interpreted in different ways, maybe he should love someone who loves him, or should love himself, or maybe someone who deserves to be loved.

Reviews

[Taost]

I actually love this. It's so sweet and simple, and it really makes me think of someone I love. It was a little hard to follow at first, but I got it and I love it.

[maya_online]

I'm glad you did, thank you!