Love is a heart breaker

Love is a heart breaker

A Poem by Maximillion

Love, not very many

 people know the feeling.

Me, I thought I did. I guess she

 just wasn't the one for me.

I but it still hurts that we

 aren't together. It kills me

inside to know that she

is now in love whit someone

eles. But we have moved on. 

© 2012 Maximillion


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Mia
Without love there is no heartbreak but then there wouldn't be love. Regardless of all the potential hurt, love (when it's right) is such a gift. This is lovely. Just two things I'd like to point out. The first is the line "I but it still hurts..." the 'I' shouldn't be there and with the line ""is now in love whit someone" I sure you meant 'with'.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is true for a lot of people like em

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can relate. This is sad but you did a great job expressing what was on your heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is sad, but great. I can totally relate to it. I know a lot of people still to these days really don't know what 'love' truly means. I have to admit I'm still one of these people. It's better to admit than going around lying saying I do. It sucks when you want to be with that person, and they've moved on. You done a great job expressing your feelings from your heart :)
Great job once again!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


:) this is lovely.. and flowing of emotions

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Maximillion
Maximillion

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My name is Justin Grant and I like writing poems. Im 15 and Ive been writing sence I was 12. Im an open book ill tell you anything you want to know about me. more..

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