These new feelings

These new feelings

A Poem by Maximillion

I can't explain it, but it feels like as if  its love, but I dont know. So what are these new feelings that are confusing me. it make me cry at night, scream in my sleep. I need help, I dont know what to do. To many emotions, people leaving me, family dying. I can't take all these feelings all at once. It feels like a mixture of lust and depression.

SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME.

© 2012 Maximillion


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this is good

Posted 12 Years Ago


very good why to expression yourself! It hope you find someone to talk to

Posted 12 Years Ago


Poignant , you expressed yourself well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sad....but I love the part where you said it feels like a mixture of depression and lust. Two things a lot of people have to deal with, it's hard, especially when things happen all at one time. Keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Emotional...sad...depressing...Good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sad. I can really feel the emotion in this. It's heart wrenching. Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i understand where yu r coming from but just wish i could help but no matter wat i will always love yu with all of my heart

Posted 12 Years Ago


Best old song. "Should I stay or should I go." Life give us many choices. I believe we need to think and make wise decisions. Better to experience life then wished you did. Great desperation in the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


An emotional piece filled with desperation....Great write.....Whisk

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on May 3, 2012
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Maximillion
Maximillion

summersville, AL



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My name is Justin Grant and I like writing poems. Im 15 and Ive been writing sence I was 12. Im an open book ill tell you anything you want to know about me. more..

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