Lost

My soul has left me behind. I am lost i have no were else to go, no were to hide from the demons in the shadows. What do I do, were do I go.  This pain deep within me makes me scream at night. I can no longer live like this. My life is coming to an end. I will not let death stand in my way, I must find myself. I am lost in this never ending life.

Author's Note

I need to find myself.
btw every thing that I writer I really feel like.

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

No one is ever lost, the soul is in the shadows of your pain. Face your demons and you can live through the soul, fulfilling your life's purpose and enjoy happiness. It is possible, I'm living proof. Keep writing, it will help you heal and grow.

[Deandra Dawn]

Again, keep writing...it's the best outlet anyone has.

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is kind a dark, hopeless and painful.. Emotions flows in it..
You also expressed some kind of frustration in here.. But i like it!
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up! :D

[Angelic Surrender]

Go inside yourself and find your inner light. That is where you will find solace. Nice write.

[olla]

you are still young.. don't be in a hurry to "find yourself" your "self" is not lost... as time passes your "self" will emerge.. so it is really a matter of getting to know the "self" that you are.. your writing will help you.. it is very good already but it can also be a way to see where you have been and how far you have come..

[MOON]

Heartbreaking , writing is good.

[CourtneyShay]

do yu need help to find yur self

[Coyote Poetry]

Writing can be a release for thoughts and pain. A lot of pain in this poem. Life is hard for everyone. Each of us will make many mistakes. As long as you learn from them and become better. You will be okay. Easy to get lost. Hard to find steady ground and new goals. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Alex Crow]

I love the way you put your feelings into work. It's good writing.