my love

my love, you are my world. i  am your servant, i  will love you till the end of time. i will care for you, i will tell you everyday that i love you. i will make other girls jelous of you. i will live my life for you i need you in my life. you are my heart, my soul, my world i will die without you. my love is for you. i love yo,u and you love me. you need me and i need you. so lets be together

FOREVER & ALWAYS

Reviews

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

This is very sweet and I agree with Monique.
Jelous should be jealous and yu,o should be you. Also maybe a little capitalization could help.

[Monique]

this is how more men need to be