driven away

Shes gone and its all my falt. I've driven her away. All the lies that i have told all the tears that has fell its all my falt. What i did was unexceptable. I shouldnt have done it. I ask myself do i deserve to live. Then i think what would it do to her. The love of my life is gone. And it all my falt i did it, i hurt her. I've driven her away.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to learn lesson when you are young. Liars will get caught sooner or later. Best to lead with honest words and feeling. Words can create great pain. I like the honest tone to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Monique]

if she's the love of your life then keep trying and stop lying