Holding On

As my arms holds her tightly she falls to sleep.As she dreams in my arms her head lays silently on my chest.I wonder what she is dreaming about.As i gently kiss her on the forehead she smiles.As shes opens her eyes i stare at them as they sparkle.I think to myself do i deserve her.As she asks me why are you staring at me.I say because you are the most beautiful girl that i have ever seen in my life.

Reviews

[John-Paul H.]

You sound good but you should probably write poems in a column.

[CourtneyShay]

awwww who is this bout
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[Ink Angel]

This is such a romantic poem. Keep it up nice uplifting write.

[Coyote Poetry]

You create a very nice scene with your words. I like the gentle statements leading to a very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Monique]

OMG this is adorable!!

[olla]

I like this very much.. it is simple and sweet.. keep writing..