lies

lies

A Poem by Max
"

this is a true story, mostly

"
you know nothing about me
you dont even try
my whole life to you
is all a lie

you hold me down
you hold me back
you put me on the wrong track
careful, before theres no turning back.

one day youll
see the real me
and then youll know
the true colors i show

you cant hold onto me forever
soon i can break away
i wont need to stay
and ill be gone

© 2012 Max


Author's Note

Max
thank you for reading. please review.

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I like it. It's beautiful and dark. Has a nice rythem to it as well

Posted 12 Years Ago


Dark, very nicely written, has wonderful voice and a good flow

Posted 12 Years Ago


Good minus the last line it's like rhyme rhyme Gone

Posted 12 Years Ago



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I am 14. My lifes just been pretty screwed up. I just recently started to write poetry. i am very weird, and i like rock music, playing the bass, knives, and fire (and no, im not emo, i just like kniv.. more..

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