Alone

Befriend the darkness,
find comfort in pain,
you can only lose,
you have nothing to gain.
you've gone through so much,
yet gotten so little,
you've been left alone as such.

Love hate,
hate love,
there's no difference to fate,
but you cant let it shove.
still you must
try, try, try
to find out
why, why, why?

Author's Note

Thank you for reading my second poem. please review.

Reviews

[Loner]

Beautifully portrayal of inner feelings
that is what a writer is ..........

[Harley (arbiter)]

Nice. Haha. Love really isn't worth it huh? I know how it feels. It sucks. Nice write

[JustBeYou]

Wow that's amazing great poem :) I love it

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Really good!! I really like your Alone poem!:) Excellent job!

[Demi Rose]

i think my friend and co-author would absolutely adore this poem. i liked it myself. it has a lot of truth.

[SWS Agent Ham]

Exquisite

[SlightlyOdd]

it's good everyone's life is screwed up but that's what makes us stronger you have good potential. i think i can relate. i hope you don't take that last comment the wrong way I've said it and some people react strongly

[hmm]

Like your rhyme scheme, nicely done!