I miss you

 Just another perfect dream
like a glass beneath the rain
Blurry, no clarity - -
Yet the feeling was so real.
Your touch which run my arms
to my hands - you held.
Your sweet flying kisses
travels the air swiftly landed
on my crimson cheeks.
Your scent, like the smell of the
puffy clouds I cuddle upon at night.
Your breath, your whispers,
your eyes, your lips.

No I can't see you.
Now I can, when I close my eyes
I know you're there . .
longing, grasping, watching.
I miss you.

Reviews

[Angad Waraich]

The longing for a love not to be.
Well done.
Enjoyed the piece.

Thank you.
-Angad

[Mirra]

Thank you for the wonderful review :-)

[MoriartyMesa]

Would one assume this is a longing while looking out a window, or waiting for a text. The emotion is real and raw.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SgP7SnZJk_Q

[Mirra]

Thank you for the review ^_^

[Konigin]

aaaawwwww. It is so hard to love someone sooooooo much, and not have them there. This is an astounding poem Mirra. The longing and love and raw, aching pain, were felt.

Marvelous! ^,^

[Mirra]

Thank you Chelsea ^_^ Glad you liked this one.

[Konigin]

You are welcome Mirra! :)

[NeiL ArandA]

Most good writers do have good imagination and are dreamers . Hah that explains it

[Mirra]

This one is a combination of reality and imagination ^_^ Thanks for the review :-)

[Gracious]

THIS POEM LITERALLY GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS. WELL DONE Stay awesome!

[Mirra]

Thank you so much Gracious :-) Really appreciate this!