My Eternity

This is a poem I wrote hope you like it This poem is copyrighted to me

 I travelled endlessly through the valley of the damned

Never casting doubt on that which is fates hand

When everything else had become sour and grey

Darkness seemed like the only way

I continued forward never to look back

Trying to escape the darkness of which am wrapped

I try to run but lights no where to find

I must be trapped here

As the darkness slowly takes over my mind  

Reviews

[Unloved_kitty]

Nicely written, I really like this poem =]
Keep it up!

[Hello, Goodbye]

Love this.. the hard hitting points and the strong usage of brevity.. finely crafted.