F**k You

a few days ago, i completely freaked out. when i wrote this i was not in sound mind. also, i wrote a better version but i accidently reloaded the page and had to write this one.

i feel my life slipping. consciousness fading. life flashing by - i will never ever be whole again. this is the last of me. i'm losing my sanity - such a tragedy. but it couldn't get the f**k out of here quick enough.

what right do you have - to rip apart my past? why have you come here? all that exists within me is fear - for my life and yours alike. from this point forward...

i feel my mind aching. body shaking. yelling in my head. i think i'm better off dead. i hear voices of some kind - i think i've lost my f*****g mind - they're telling me to kill you and all of your lies. you'll be the death of me. but i couldn't die quick enough.

what right do you have - to rip apart my past? you don't belong here. all that exists within in me is fear - for my life and yours alike. from this point forward all that -  i will hear will be the endless sound of silence in my padded room with my arms tied to my back.

because if they weren't...i'd kill you! (kill you) i'd kill you (kill you) i'd rip your f*****g throat apart. i'd kill you (kill you) i'd kill you (kill you) and i would eat you're f*****g heart.

f**k you. f**k you. f**k you. f**k you. (and all of your lies)

Reviews

[serpent]

f**k! its such a powerful ballad of fear and loathing... the writer seems to be moving so quickly on the X and Y axes of love..her presence on one hand is scary to him and suddenly he wants to break free of that fear and kill her...it very correctly points at the past that leads to a huge impact on what our present and even future (maybe)like...
outstanding!

[Matteus Ducey]

thank you.

[Nobody.]

the rage bleeds through wonderfully and skillfully. good writing. cheers!