abc poem

abc poem

A Poem by elephant
"

experiment with a scene

"

Archor and chains under the rust tinged sun

Bundled up in tangles on the dock harbor

Colored in red by the lip stick of time

They sit heavy forever their labor done

© 2010 elephant


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Cleverly written, and I do like the opening line especially.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Not my favorite poem, but i still like it :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


I really really like this peice!! I love the imagery you used in here!! Amazing job on this poem! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 13, 2010
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