Sitting Alone

By me is nice

 sit under a sky which drips
While the setting sun slowly dips
I sit silent and transfixed…what is this?
Solitude fixed with bliss?
A sour kiss?
Or just my Loneliness?

Reviews

[elephant]

Thank you Alicia you made me smile you should be happy of that.

[Alicia™]

To me this poem paints a picture of a person sitting alone on a beach, just looking at the beauty of nature. Though it's short and I usually prefer 3-5 stanzas, I think this length is just perfect to explain everything you need to. Adding this to my reading list, and great job!!