Blah blah Bang

poo poo

Amidst dirty over cast
A soaked and broken skeleton
A drowning autumn sun
That automated gun
Spiting hot and fast zeros and ones

Reviews

[Amanda Crandall]

Im taking the zeros and ones as a reference to binary... which instantly made me think of matrix. I think this poem does a good job at using accessible language to tap into an inaccessible thought. In short poems every line needs to hold impending weight and I feel that the first line retains the same pressure as the other four lines.