We Have an Angle Sum of 180 Degrees -- Beta

Second in the series of three -- the loving.

To you in the far east,

in sight yet not in touch,

as if an invisible force field,

present to repel me,

from you.

Those days in my memory,

had as if covered by jamais vu,

that I had reminded myself so much,

of the sweetness we brewed,

it had become so distant.

Your hands,

your hair,

your lips,

every part of my sensation,

twitched,

at the thought of you,

as if my destiny,

had entwined with yours.

That warm glance was all I needed,

to go on,

to go back to those days,

before I cast myself into damnation.

Yet I left you.

I was blinded and deafened,

by a luring grin,

that dragged me into this,

eternal hell.

Please!

I beg of you!

Bring me back to your utopia!

Free me from my chains of suffering!

Please......

Touch my lips with yours,

just,

once more......

Reviews

[Emily]

I really like this one!
Well done!
Keep it up!

[Kami Grace]

Thank you very much, Emily! :)

[Confuser]

Kami Grace, I loved it! The wonderful but oh so sad expressions of regret, desire: the memories of love are expressed beautifully; to ask for forgiveness...the longing with such emotional pain...thank you so much...now part 3...Great work. Dale

[Kami Grace]

Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment, Dale! :) Gotta work on part 3 when thoughts come flooding in! :D

[Confuser]

You're welcome!!!

[Jamestown]

Wow! Very passionate and moving! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Kami Grace]

Thank you very much for reading, James! Gotta read your works soon :)