Edge

Pained.

Lonely silhouette,

soaked in oblivion,

roaming aimlessly,

in this wintry night.

Flakes of flesh fell,

out of this frozen heart,

like puzzle,

shattered,

an urgent need for a person,

to amend the quaint core.

Yet no response.

Blood is stopping.

Soul dims.

The desolate person,

slowed down,

fell onto the cold hard ground.

Tears ran down his pale face.

He thought of the past,

the sweet nice patches,

of memory,

resembling warmth.

The tiniest bits of joy,

from the discrete pictures in mind,

tangled his last finger with life.

Don't let go.

Don't let me go.

For you have everyone,

that cares,

that listens,

but I only have you.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Really nice piece of work! I agree with Sami you have a very unique, smooth
and almost natural feel to your work,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Kami Grace]

Thank you for checking out my writing and your kind words! Now as I read more and more of your pieces, I learnt a lot more about thoughts on different aspects as well as your beautiful style of poetry! :)

[Jamestown]

I honestly believe, every single person in this world has something to offer and
if we just take a minute, chances are will find it, with that being said doesn't always mean
it will be good, that's the kicker, lol I said something!

[Kami Grace]

haha I have to agree! Everyone is born a genius. As writers, even we may not have a lot of readers, there must be someone who get inspired of our work, just like how I learnt from your poetry! :)

[Jamestown]

Absolutely, and I from yours and our other peers!

[Sami Khalil]

'the sweet nice patches,
of memory,
resembling warmth.
The tiniest bits of joy,
from the discrete pictures in mind,
tangled his last finger with life."

Your style is very unique you and very enchanting...Bravo....

[Kami Grace]

Wow! Thank you very much for reading and giving me such a wonderful comment, Sami! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..................

[Laura Lynn]

I don't know, there is much truth in what you say, but as they say, what goes around comes around,

[Kami Grace]

Thank you for giving me a review! Yea, karma exists!

[Emily]

'out of this frozen heart'
love this line!
Keep it up!!

[Kami Grace]

Thanks a lot for reading and leaving such a lovely comment, Emily! :)