Now

Now

A Poem by Kami Grace

I looked up.
There was no solace,
no mercy,
but the scorn of the cold crescent.

I looked down.
There was no peace,
no hope,
but the darkness of the bottomless void.

I jumped off this building,
letting my spirit fade away with my past.
I had made too many mistakes to go on,
a death could free me from pain, at last.

I thought I died.

Until I realized I woke up on a normal school day.

Two years ago.

It was before corruption crept into life.
It was when I was still a daughter of my parents.
It was when I was still the best student in class.
It was when I was still a child with a bright future.

And never did I make the same mistakes again.

Oh, reader,
didn't see you there.
Were you reading my experience?
Don't even dream of having such a life.
I am chosen, not you, only I have a second chance.

So.

Treasure the past,
treasure the present,
treasure the future.
For this is your one and only life.

© 2014 Kami Grace


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' .. the scorn of the cold crescent.' - that's such a tangible phrase.

Beautifully and gently said, lesson learned. So few of us are given a second chances. Consequently, yes, yes, YES, better take care of the one precious life we inherit.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kami Grace

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading and leaving such a lovely review! I am elated to know that my messa.. read more
I enjoyed it. The sadness came through, the regret and loved the last stanza too; great message.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kami Grace

10 Years Ago

I am very glad that you enjoyed the poem! Thank you for reading and I'm very grateful for your comm.. read more
Confuser

10 Years Ago

no problem; I new, but hope that doesn't matter;
Confuser

10 Years Ago

Had to read it again..........................

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