Despair

I looked into the dark pit,

from there I heard a weak moan.

I let out a giggle,

for I thought the weak deserved to suffer alone.

I went back to my friends,

but today their smiles were strange.

It seemed like they were hiding something from me,

perhaps it was the omen that something was going to change.

And the worst happened.

Their love turned into hatred.

The ones I trusted had pointed their blades to me.

They laughed and shouted in gaiety,

pushing me mercilessly to my deepest misery.

I was sitting down there helplessly,

shouting tiredly for an answer.

From the dazzling light I saw a shadow,

but all that figure gave me was a cold laughter.

Reviews

[soulesswriter]

kinda dark...its cool actually great write.i think its kinda short but its actually cool because that has happened to me so many times because i trust people and they always stab me in the back but i never learn because i go and trust someone else:)its real nice douh i like it a lot i think u should try to add more:)

[Kami Grace]

thanks for your review! :) i will try with some new elements in my next poem! :)