We never part

Your eyes are wide open,

your trails of tear are dry.

Your chest has stopped moving,

perhaps, goodbye.

You were there when I felt helpless,

you were there to bring me hope.

You were the place I could find solace,

but now, my heart is torn apart by a rope.

How could you leave me like this?

So silent and without a hint?

I would go with you,

together, back to our first footprint.

I went to the tree.

The tree which changed me from hundred to none.

I took a rope and tied it beside your lifeless body,

my eyes are wide open.

Reviews

[Praveeta]

Truly heartfelt piece. The second stanza is overflowing with emotions which is felt by the reader.

You were there when I felt helpless,
you were there to bring me hope.
You were the place I could find solace,
but now, my heart is torn apart a rope.

Nicely penned, Kami.

[Kami Grace]

Thank you for your lovely review, Praveeta :)

[Praveeta]

My pleasure

[Ashiq B]

Very emotionally driven piece, hats off!! Brilliant use of words!!! I really liked it.

[Kami Grace]

Thank you for lovely comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)