Desperately Wanting

Inspired by Better than Ezra's song of the same title

Like a young girl

dancing under a golden waterfall

falling into a daydream sky

Spreading her feathered

wings so she could fly.

 

Pass the moon and the stars

 to the heavens and even further above.

Surfing the the cool spring winds 

 to find my place

in your arms

 

Both of us desperately wanting

an unspoken passion

that our eyes would scream.

Wanting to be pulled so close,

and kissed...Softly.

 

Like a young girl

dancing under a golden waterfall

falling into a daydream sky

Spreading her feathered

wings so she could fly!

 

Pass Venus and Mars

   to the heavens and even further above.

floating the gentle spring wind

 to find my place

next to you.

 

Both of us desperately wanting

an unspoken Lust

that our hearts would tease.

wanting to be pulled so close,

and kissed...please.

 

  

Author's Note

With Love,

Jayden DeVoir

Reviews

[zeronineight]

The tension feels so young, for the lack of a better word. Not juvenile, but more like a first. First partner? First romantic/sexual experience? It's unsure.

This reminds me of the loves I've had when I was younger, when I was more bound by the rules of my parents or society, yet the love, the Need that I had felt was so strong, so desperate. But still so light, so freeing. It's a complicated feeling that only makes sense in the vast expanse of our youths and it's so nice to see it reflected in your work.

Thank you for sharing!

[Matthew Kult]

Much appreciated. Thank you for stopping in.

Matthew

[Petals & Pearls]

Beautiful and delicate. Tender. I enjoyed it! 😊

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you much.

Matthew

[AYVID N]

"Like a young girl
dancing under a golden waterfall
falling into a daydream sky"

~ These lines are every poet's dream. I'm lifted to the stars in the sky. Thank you for such beautiful poetry.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for taking the time.

Matthew

[Starbaby]

This is beautiful Matthew, so soft, gentle and sensual. It reminds me perhaps of first love.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for the kind review

Matthew

[W. Barrett Munn]

I like the choices you made how to enjamb your lines and your use of caesura to control the pace.

Winston

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in

Matthew

[Neville]

I swear you just keep getting better and better .. write on .. and on .. Neville

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you Neville. It's appreciated

Matthew

[Neville]

You are more than welcome Matthew ... Neville

[Chris Shaw]

You took me a long way back in time with this beautiful piece. Romantic and longing. I can remember, just. Much enjoyed and felt.

Chris

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in

Matthew

[Julian]

The heat of passion, the longing of hearts enraptured by classical romance - all so nicely done!

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks so much.

Matthew

[Julian]

my pleasure!

[Stu. T.H.]

Another golden piece from the collection of works by author Matthew Kult.
Again, the work arouses our mind and heighten our senses to picture the scenic depiction in the work and tells tale of a love story, the best kind of narration to a love poem.
And I am too curious about the meaning to the golden waterfall, it has been the first I've heard in the Western media of a golden waterfall of sort. But it certainly has the charms and fit nicely into the piece.

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping by. It's appreciated

Matthew

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Again a most beautiful write ✍️

[Matthew Kult]

Most thankful for your time.

Matthew