Violet Sky

Watching another sunset alone in my room

Telling myself I should be admiring it's inspiration

In reality, I am crying my soul out in private desperation.

Why can't I be good enough? or even have better...stuff.

Why did I get stuck here?  No, no more tears!

 

Alone in my room, under a velvet sky

Telling myself some fretful lies.

Wanting to die.

Going to cry!

wanting to die!

Telling Myself those filthy lies.

 Alone in my room, under a Violet sky.

 

How did I get here? Not those F****n' tears!

Why can't i be tough? or shed some of the...fluff?

In reality, I am crying my soul out in private agitation.

Telling myself, I should look like some glorification.

Watching another sunset alone in my room

Reviews

[light and ashes]

Beauty is sometimes missed by the sullen.

"How did I get here?" "What happened to me?"
"Why can't I be stronger or better?"
.......
All questions I asked myself.

The simple answer is that you couldn't because you just weren't.
..
but you can always be a better man or woman, tomorrow.

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for the time. It's appreciated.

Matthew

[light and ashes]

You are welcome!! Feel better!

[Neville]

Hey Matt, it's an honour to be your twentieth reviewer .. now that's some achievement .. so cheer up, chin up and move on .. although i imagine (hope) you have done by now .. Neville

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for stopping in. Much appreciated

Matthew

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Hellos, Matthew, this is a good chapter,
The world is dark, but the sun is there,
and I like the part where the protagonist
wants to appreciate the view, great write!
----Maynard

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in. Much appreciated

Matthew

[1809 Black Plague December]

most welcome, Dearest, :P

[Celie Rose]

I love the flow and the rhyme. I can feel deep pain and suffering. " I am crying my soul out in private desperation. I can relate. It is well written and expressed

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for stopping in. Much appreciated.

Matthew

[Ken Simm.]

Excellent flowing concept that belies its subject matter. I like it.

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in. Much appreciated.

Matthew

[Chris]

Round and around it flows - spiraling down faster, smoother... inexorably. And yet it feeds itself like all good despair does...

[icelandicblue]

I absolutely love the shape of this piece. A violet sky is beautiful but it also warns of storms and danger. Nice write.

[RainC]

What a beautiful Violet Sky! Mesmerizing ink...spilled from an emotional pen!
Wowed by this Matthew!:)

[AWickedMoon]

Wow what a powerful poem, such a eyrie yet beautiful pull of emotions.

-Wicked

[Matthew Kult]

Who else should I read? Any suggestions? Anything else of yours you would like me to read?

[AWickedMoon]

If you like darker the I have quite a few. I like Carnage or The Dark kings fey.

[Lily Mae]

Deep dark cries from the soul.. I could feel the pain.. an excellent piece..xx