Eternity Shared

A moment shared with love

A perfect scene from a dream

filled with sweat and screams.
The scent from a rose covered
desire. As your body begs for
the release of an
ever growing fire.
I taste every
inch of you, teasing
convincingly, pleasing seductivly
As our lips finally meet.
Lost in a world all our own.
Dancing to a rhythmic beat.
And in this moment, time is ours.
A nibble on your lip
as I slowly slip to feed from
your womb as a moan
escapes from the
pleasures your mind finds from
the ecstacy, the thrill that goes beyond
simple trust and complicated lust.
Minds and hearts quicken
Each breath becomes
shallow and fast.
Begging for this time to forever last.
You scream for the heavens
as the stars explode into
an awaiting nirvana of
pleasurable kisses.
Fulfilling all those lost
wishes.
Every inch of our bodies
longing for the deeper release
while our pulses increase
Holding each other close
through every dancing
note our bodies sing.
Finding ourselves in
something much more
than a simple fling.
Within a moment
where it will always be
You and me
in eternity

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

These days alas I don’t live by passion in the sheets but
I do recall several or maybe more times in my life seems like another person not me
These days I find passion in my hobbies and dark rich chocolate lol occasional
Thanks for a very descriptive cleanly erotic write

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping by.

Matthew

[An owl on the moon]

Such a sensual mix of love and light, drifting over skin and sky.. You've created a wondrous blend of beauty reaching into the wonders of the universe alive and shimmering around you. Exquisite!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

I adore the eroticism conveyed through the third eye ~the skims if skin taken past the fingertips into the sacral sacred unity between the absolute all that hooks into moments of such pure ecstacy~

[Amy Bumpas]

Not one of your dark twisted poems...nice...sensual, teasing...
and such a array of erotic visuals.

[David W Moore III]

Very nicely done. And no blood! Well except maybe a touch from the nibbling, but that's okay. You do love/lust well. (time for a cold shower. Between you and Selene. Whew)