Eternity Shared

A moment shared with love

A perfect scene from a dream

filled with sweat and screams.
The scent from a rose covered
desire. As your body begs for
the release of an
ever growing fire.
I taste every
inch of you, teasing
convincingly, pleasing seductivly
As our lips finally meet.
Lost in a world all our own.
Dancing to a rhythmic beat.
And in this moment, time is ours.
A nibble on your lip
as I slowly slip to feed from
your womb as a moan
escapes from the
pleasures your mind finds from
the ecstacy, the thrill that goes beyond
simple trust and complicated lust.
Minds and hearts quicken
Each breath becomes
shallow and fast.
Begging for this time to forever last.
You scream for the heavens
as the stars explode into
an awaiting nirvana of
pleasurable kisses.
Fulfilling all those lost
wishes.
Every inch of our bodies
longing for the deeper release
while our pulses increase
Holding each other close
through every dancing
note our bodies sing.
Finding ourselves in
something much more
than a simple fling.
Within a moment
where it will always be
You and me
in eternity

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

These days alas I don’t live by passion in the sheets but
I do recall several or maybe more times in my life seems like another person not me
These days I find passion in my hobbies and dark rich chocolate lol occasional
Thanks for a very descriptive cleanly erotic write

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping by.

Matthew

[Starbaby]

Well, shiver me timbers. This is not at all what I was expecting to find here when I clicked on the title. Give me a moment to fan myself......Okay, a sensual write, and as one who also leans to erotic poetry writing, I appreciate a delicacy and subtleness on the subject, which you have shown here. Proof positive that one need not be graphic, vulgar, or resort to using "those" words to write steamy stuff.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for stopping in. Appreciated

Matthew

[Stu. T.H.]

The mental picture that it paints is very much alluring.
There's a bit of yearning, a bit of growing passion while nurturing a bit of personal longed sorrows well hidden behind the momentary pleasure as well.
The great contrast between when one joins sheets with another compared to simply meeting them on the street, despite not directly implied in the work, does a lot to make this work a truly accurate depiction of desires and lust, as well as people's mentality in the intimate act.

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in. Much appreciated

Matthew

[Seriana]

There are many worlds all to our own. So many unique, yet just as you've expressed here. I agree with Julie, a clean piece written, yet the intent was easily recognized.

Thanks for sharing your expressions!

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for stopping by.

Matthew

[Neville]

even in the great scheme of things, eternity is such a long time .. I so hope you find what you want and she never loses her appeal or her flavour .. Neville

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for the time. Appreciated.

Matthew

[Neville]

No problem, no worries, my pleasure .. Neville

[John the Baptist]

Erotica without vulgarity is always the best kind. You communicate an experience that is both sensual and spiritual.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for stopping in. Much appreciated

Matthew

[Silmara McGarry]

I think I have never read a better poem that is so erotically/romantic and so well described in such details that your readers can't stop themselves but dreaming about it. And the end, beautiful!
Very nicely pinned 💯
All best Matthew.
:-)

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you again. It's appreciated.

Matthew

[Coyote Poetry]

Lustful and wonderful poetry Matthew.
"Begging for this time to forever last.
You scream for the heavens
as the stars explode into
an awaiting nirvana of
pleasurable kisses."
The above lines could stand alone. I wonder. Do we chase lust or does lust seek us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[ROSALIND]

Matty I mean lol annoying

[ROSALIND]

This brought shivers to my spine but one of hot romance probably one I never experience. Excellent writing Matthew I also have a son named Matthew but he shortened it to Matthew. best wishes Rosalind

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for taking the time.

Matthew