Madness

Review given to Selene's Red Beryl Vows

Shall I be your end,

 a thought that runs its course?

 or shall I make us the beginning?

 Will you be my victim,

 my cherished prize.

Or will you enter into a world

created by obsession.

 A world of pure madness....

or madness that has created this world.

 Will you lust for me,

 desire me.

Hurt me.

Shall I be your Angel,

with a tender touch and loving caress...

will you accept me?

 Allow me to travel down

the unseen path of purity.

 Will you lust for the desire?

 Obsess over the possibilities.

Will you find us a w***e....

to cherish.

Dress her like a doll.

Lust for her.

Shall I show her the attention you want?

Tease you.

Please her

 while you watch me

 with your gaze

 fixated upon the purity

 of madness.

 Will you stare

 into her eyes

 as the cord

 tightens.

Shall I stare into yours

 as the thrill

 quickens your heart,

 arouses you.

 Will you desire me,

 please me.

Taunt me

for having her.

Will you leave

 a rose

 on her chest...

an offering of love....

remorse....

madness...

Author's Note

Madness is contagious.

Inspired by Selene's ~Red Beryl Vows~

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

oh wow, oh wow, Dearest, love it,
I like it because it is madness and twisted lust
the relish of love, but affection to a "w***e"
where the purity lingers in a doll, a "w***e"
fun to read, great write! p.s. join my group, Erotica, will invite, ----Maynard

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in. I will check it out.

Matthew

[1809 Black Plague December]

most welcome, Dearest, :P

[Stu. T.H.]

Could it be person whose doppelganger conflict with themselves for mutual favours, or simply two people with uncanny intertwining fates, I'm so unsure ~ But that's the perk, what kicks off the mind to rev its engines and explore indepth the unseen meanings that are hidden from itself. Madly entrancing your work was, author Matthew Kult. It reminds me of those mystery drama classics on some of the more favourable films I followed from American media.

Though, I still wonder what is a "w _ _ _ e", what could it be that the site has censored it, knowing how some words despite with extremity is low could also be consred, strange.

[Matthew Kult]

I believe the word was w***e sorry if it censors it again. Thanks for the time and thoughts. It's appreciated.

Matthew

[Stu. T.H.]

And I see, the fill-in was "hor", it didn't censor it on the notifications of the home page though, only the actual comment. This site continues to puzzle me...

[W. Barrett Munn]

Very well written with nice rhythm.

Winston

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in.

Matthew

[Neville]

I am so glad I journeyed here this mane .. I am actually meant to be working .. but its coffee time so what the hell .. it is also an honour to be the twentieth individual to post their impression for You and posterity .. All good Things and write on Matthew .. Neville

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping by

Matthew

[Neville]

you are most welcome please forgive my late acknowledgement of your acknowledgement.

Seasonal Regards, Neville

[D. Mansfield]

Madness? Passion, love? They all are so closely related it's hard to separate. Love the poems story, been in a few just as crazy

[Matthew Kult]

Thanks for stopping in.

Matthew

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love is madness----i am much madness and at this point should be in an asylum---

i feel this poem, Matthew--

as Marvin Gaye sang "that's the way love is"
just as you describe---opposites attract and then become the same.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank You so Much

[drew garner]

Saw the title, read the poem, thought it was very European and decided I enjoyed it.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for the time and review

Matthew

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

madness is how will create in our mind and how to satisfy it is the mystery. Its a turn on to see your mate lust someone else you desire as you watch. Patience is the key in a situation like that but not all can handle that haha really loved reading it, you are very creative and love how you put it together for all to read :)

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you very much for the lovely words

Matthew

[STORIES BEHIND EYES]

you welcome hun

[Alisa Js]

Madness is certainly contagious, for sure...

...and I would venture to say, it all depends upon the exact kind of madness it is.

We have both titled poems with the same name, yet, I would certainly say the content is very different, yet does indeed describe a particular type of madness.

Thank you for taking the time to stop by.

I shall return.

Alisa ;-)

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for your kind words

Matthew

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I feel as if I've stumbled into an episode of Law and Order: Special Victims Unit...sexual fantasies and sexual atrocities are often closely intertwined...passion and crimes of passion or psychosis...I don't know that I believe that madness is contagious...but it certainly sells books and screenplays. A wickedly interesting read well penned.

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you Fabian

Matthew