The Suicide Note

Bye Mom

I write this for you

looking out the window watching the rain

cause mom, you always knew it true

trying to forget all the pain

I can't live with it anymore

Noticing a squirrel in my tree

He treats me like a dirty w***e.

wishing to be that free.

I just want you to know

waiting too long for it to never end

that you will have to let go

hoping my soul will mend

I will never be free.....

Praying for anyone to rescue me

He promised to always find me.

knowing my end begins with this tree.

I figured out How.

Accepting my fate....

Mom, it has to be now.

Refusing to live with his hate.

 

I love you, mom.  Please forgive me.

 

Love Always,

 

Samantha

Author's Note

Dancing at the end of a short rope next to a tall tree........

Reviews

[Rosalind Gale]

As it happens, I was coming over to read you. I am enamored of this poem - though for reasons I need not go into. Sad, yes of course, and yet to me, just blank, heartless, full of heart - all those clashing moods, so hard to define -
Thank you Matthew.
-x-

[Matthew Kult]

Thank you for taking the time

Matthew

[Rosalind Gale]

You are so welcome -
-x-

[David W Moore III]

I had to go back and read each poem separately. They play back even better the second time when read by each self. See, you made me read it twice! Very evocative, as of course the subject can be, but you (excuse the pun) brought it to life.

[1416]

You are in a sturdy position at the top of my favorites, and this is why. It's like you get it...

[Cassiopia Summers]

Wow, I really like the touching sorrow and apology of this poem. I can feel the hurt, and the release as well.

[Shalini Dinesh]

Nothing is permanent, every night passes with a hope that there will be bright sunshine coming soon.. enjoy every moment of life... this was a sad , deep and heartfelt poem..

[luciddreamer]

So sad...given enough time pain will end...my favorite quote is "This too shall pass."....