My Caramel Sundae

I wrote this for the hottest chick of all time, hoping to get lucky.

 

In the land of hot chicks, there is a queen.

 

She’s the hottest chick I’ve ever seen.

I’ve seen a lot and I was amazed,

When that chick’s looks left me so dazed.

She nearly knocked me out, smiling in her way,

I’d like to see the rest someday.

 

She’s my Caramel Sundae

 

She’s a storm of sexy, tearing up the Earth

And she knows just what she’s worth.

With her innocent eyes and crafty wits

Man I’d like to grab her….

 

Sweet Caramel Sundae

 

You know I’d like to eat her cherry

But she makes me feel like Tom chasing Jerry.

I’ll chase her my whole life, because I just can’t let her pass.

I’ve got to grab a hold of her magnificent….

 

Oh, sweet angels of mercy don’t make me wait.

I want her on my dessert plate.

I need her now and this may sound corny,

But that chick just plain makes me horny.

 

Oh apex of women, I know you can hear me.

Now you know that I need you near me.

You stole my mind and my heart went following.

If you leave me now, you’ll leave me wallowing

In a broken life, with no hope for joy,

Why not just make me your lover boy?

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

Oh so very cute. I love it. Sounds like you got it bad. Great write.

[SweetPeachesAlways]

I need her now and this may sound corny,
But that chick just plain makes me horny.

I LOVE THIS LINE! Sexy write! And, of course, one for my favorites!

[Jessie.]

she's my cherry pie...

i think that song should be entered in the cheezy contest too.

[Monners]

This is awesome. I love it...especially
"With her innocent eyes and crafty wits

Man I'd like to grab her�."

hilarious. Bravo. =)

[The Archangel Gabriel]

"Oh, sweet angels of mercy don't make me wait.
I want her on my dessert plate."

That is so sweet of you! I think that you bring a tear to my eye with that one! That is just good love!

-Gabe

[Doug]

haha! well done. very humorous....we've all been there. nice write.

[JC Fox]

hahaha smooth I already did comment this but well seeing as how it got deleted I'll comment again ^_^ Hahahaha and I'll say it again if you told the girl she was your caramel sundae then you could have gotten some

[Stonewall]

hehe, you were going to say tits and arse... entertaining. Nice flow.