Schizoid

I'm a radioactive puppy wandering through the stuff. I need a change. Yesterday I was walking down a hallway and found myself practicing, repeating, "thank you, I appreciate that", trying to get the breathing right so I'd be relaxed the next time. Then a breeze of sadness rustled the leaves outside, and in the crackling I heard the voices of other opinions, very faintly, inspired by my paranoia, and it all became very still.

Reviews

[William Michael Reeves]

Pondering on this...the stuff being the unnecessary concern about what other people think? Then when you started to hear them tell you you froze in fusion?

[Pj]

Nice and short- to the point and powerful.
A great write!

[Marie]

Nice. I know, I'm so helpful.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

could be turned into a story. Great Write.

[ah]

this is really good, this could turn into a story if u want, keep writing, keep sharing, great s**t

[SweetPeachesAlways]

inspired by my paranoia...

yeah...uh, huh...right...shhh...

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

I like this poem. I am wandering what you mean by radioactive puppy. I love how you said " trying to get the breathing right" That sounds very real. Thank you for sharing.
Love All,
Mejasha

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Interesting. I am not sure where you are going with this one, but I like it.

-Gabe

[JC Fox]

Another of my favorite pieces of yours, I especially like the radioactive puppy part