Haiku #8

Haiku #8

A Poem by mattavelli

Late night pier fishing 

The pelicans are sleeping

The fish must be too

 

© 2008 mattavelli


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Great haiku! good job with your writing. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


mattavelli

9 Years Ago

Thank you, felicity.
SpiceCookie

9 Years Ago

you're welcome
Very nice. I love haikus. Nice and helpful reviewer, that's me. LOL.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice haiku. good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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great, inspired me to write one of my own

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

and that explains why they aren't biting, you know what I like Haikus!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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 Added on February 5, 2008

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LIFE IS A PARTY. DON'T BE A PINATA. ------------------- Hello, Thanks for visiting my page. I'm Matt. I enjoy reading and writing poetry. If you have a poem that you'd like me to read, please let.. more..

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