Haiku #6

Dust becomes a star

Thought machines create language

I count syllables

 

Reviews

[Zahra]

beautiful haiku. well constructed.

[Matching Socks]

Love the last line. :)
Shows personality.

[Willard Wells]

Nice melting of two different elements to blend into a Haiku Thank you.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I love the way you presented creation on three levels. Great!

Sal

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great Write. Nicely Done.


Rayne

[Marie]

Nice.

[ah]

great writing, thanx for posting

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Bravo - you did it...these can be the most elusive things but you did it - Bravo.
Light,
Siddartha

[SweetPeachesAlways]

thinking - there 's a concept! I like this...I still don't know what a haiku is but I like it!

[Genie]

I agree with Gabe on this one -- you've GOT it!!! Well done and bravo! And to think you only started a few months ago ... amazing job here and what a productive journey :-)