Haiku #3

Haiku #3

A Poem by mattavelli

My shoe is broken

My fingertips reek of wine

She won’t be happy

© 2016 mattavelli


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Pretty good. Nicely done.


Great Write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Peachy keen, jelly bean.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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ur in f****n trouble dude lol

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I think that you missed your calling. You should move to Japan and write haiku for a living! You could do that all day long!

-Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmm and what were you doing?

Posted 16 Years Ago


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 Added on February 5, 2008
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mattavelli

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LIFE IS A PARTY. DON'T BE A PINATA. ------------------- Hello, Thanks for visiting my page. I'm Matt. I enjoy reading and writing poetry. If you have a poem that you'd like me to read, please let.. more..

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