Haiku #1

Clouds fill tropic skies

Trees sway in the rising breeze

Aggh!! It’s a typhoon.

Reviews

[Frank]

I really liked this poem and the Aggh!! is magnificent.

[mattavelli]

Thank you, Frankee. :)

[Coyote]

Funny !

[Jia Mekare]

I love the last line! Very fun.

[Molly]

Ha ha. I laughed. Nice haiku. :)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Good haiku, great ending. Great Write.

[Marie]

Nice. Described well. I do love a good haiku.

[ah]

man, this is stunning

[JC Fox]

you start off with something nice and beautiful and then boom hit with a typhoon great!

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Hahahahhahahahahahahahhahahhahahahahhahahahhahahahhahahahahaha!

That's awesome! It grabbed me by the boo-boo!

Luv,
Gabe