Haiku #16

Haiku #16

A Poem by mattavelli
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senryu

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perhaps we are clocks
simply here to tell the time
and stick our birds out

© 2016 mattavelli


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mattavelli
Please let me know what you think.

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Bravo, revenge of the bird who knew all along humans were daft.

Posted 3 Years Ago


mattavelli

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Paul! :)
Very clever, surprise ending, with a cuckoo clock!!! I love Haiku!
Thanks for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


mattavelli

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading, Betty! :)
Betty Hermelee

3 Years Ago

My pleasure!
Cleverly penned haiku!
I do enjoy writing haiku and have a collection I thought I might publish as a book, but never have.

Posted 3 Years Ago


mattavelli

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
lol. very clever. that of course would make one a cuckoo clock. old men would be grandfather clocks, tanners would be sundials and nerds digital clocks. nicely done ... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


mattavelli

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Pete! :)
oh my god i just choked on my coffee you got me on this one:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


mattavelli

5 Years Ago

hey, Bunny, thanks for reading!
If one doesn't stick their birds out once in a while....they could go coo-coo...sorry that was bad.

I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


mattavelli

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Joe! :)
LOL. This is so fun. My mind was in the gutter cus of the last sentence tho

Posted 7 Years Ago


mattavelli

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Jessica! :)
This is more of a Senryu that a Haiku to me. Anyways, it is nice hehe kinda smile with this one though.

Posted 7 Years Ago


mattavelli

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
Yes, it is a Senryu.
CAPOLAVORO

7 Years Ago

I thought so :) It has a hint of a joke in there. :)
Hahhahahahha loved it! Made me smirk

Posted 7 Years Ago


mattavelli

7 Years Ago

Thank you! :)

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Added on December 4, 2016
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LIFE IS A PARTY. DON'T BE A PINATA. ------------------- Hello, Thanks for visiting my page. I'm Matt. I enjoy reading and writing poetry. If you have a poem that you'd like me to read, please let.. more..

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