Haiku #16

senryu

perhaps we are clocks

simply here to tell the time

and stick our birds out

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Bravo, revenge of the bird who knew all along humans were daft.

[mattavelli]

Thanks for reading, Paul! :)

[Betty Hermelee]

Very clever, surprise ending, with a cuckoo clock!!! I love Haiku!
Thanks for sharing

[mattavelli]

Thank you for reading, Betty! :)

[Betty Hermelee]

My pleasure!

[sharonlee]

Cleverly penned haiku!
I do enjoy writing haiku and have a collection I thought I might publish as a book, but never have.

[mattavelli]

Thanks for reading! :)

[Re-Pete]

lol. very clever. that of course would make one a cuckoo clock. old men would be grandfather clocks, tanners would be sundials and nerds digital clocks. nicely done ... :)

[mattavelli]

Thanks for reading, Pete! :)

[Robert Trakofler]

oh my god i just choked on my coffee you got me on this one:)

[mattavelli]

hey, Bunny, thanks for reading!

[Shy Joe]

If one doesn't stick their birds out once in a while....they could go coo-coo...sorry that was bad.

I enjoyed your poem. Thanks for sharing.

[mattavelli]

Thanks, Joe! :)

[Jessica Lima]

LOL. This is so fun. My mind was in the gutter cus of the last sentence tho

[mattavelli]

Thank you, Jessica! :)

[CAPOLAVORO]

This is more of a Senryu that a Haiku to me. Anyways, it is nice hehe kinda smile with this one though.

[mattavelli]

Thanks for reading! :)
Yes, it is a Senryu.

[CAPOLAVORO]

I thought so :) It has a hint of a joke in there. :)

[Devra Keokongchack]

Hahhahahahha loved it! Made me smirk

[mattavelli]

Thank you! :)