BLaTtAv3lli (Mattavelli- Ft.BLitZ3D)

my first collaboration

BLaTtAv3lli 

Mattavelli & BLitZ3D

Car bombs shake a city to the brink. 
Generals analyze it and think
It's time to go to war. 

Leave there entire race extinct

Church bells shake inside 

There strategy they rethink

Machine guns rattle in the streets.
A bullet cares not whom it meets.
It's gruesome work is done.

Bleeding sons lay dead like cattle from the heat

The pin f*****g pull it, flying chunks of meat 

Hoodlums and I.E.D's lead a reluctant retreat

Missiles launch from ships at sea;

Who is there that honestly
Can say what's right and wrong.

Drones approach, through the air silently 

Waiting they stare, just waiting but there their

Out of sight but bombs range long

All nations join the game.

The world is not the same.
It hits us all at home

A military police state

Our flag in flames

An outcome we should have known 

With a flash of light

No one's left to fight. 
A city's turned to dust.

An explosion of pearls

The harbor it rusts

Hiroshima reincarnated, the actions of flight

No more ideals.

No more appeals.
Just burn the whole thing down.

The radiations real

The isotopes peel

Turned into a nuclear playground 

Author's Note

http://www.writerscafe.org/blitzed
this link will take you to BLitZeD's page.

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Very good work young man. I think you pretty well covered the state of affairs in the world in one short write. It is unfortunate with people around the world on here and other places writing of the pain and hate of war and yet those in charge continue to fight. In some cases we have to fight, but when will it ended. I expect it will not. A sad state you have brought to light. Thanks,

[mattavelli]

Anks for reading, Willard. I'm 35. :)

[Willard Wells]

And your point is??? Add a good 30 to that.

[mattavelli]

Im shooting for 50 more. When I get there, I'll mumble at a retiree, thank you young man.

[Willard Wells]

Now you got it except I am not down to mumbling yet, but give me a day or two.

[mattavelli]

We'll still love you, Willard. :)

[Mitali Shah]

Great work Matt. You have well penned the flashback of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. Keep it up :)

[mattavelli]

Thanks for reading, Mitali. :)

[Kshitij Srivastava]

'With a flash of light, no one's left to fight'. Disturbing imagery and crisp writing and a nice and easy flow. Thanks for sharing. ✌

[ANTO]

This is tragic. A great collaboration - its not the writing thats tragic in the least. The writing smack the reader in the chops when explored at a deeper level. It reveals a youth that is growing up without the same unflinching obedient mindset of the countries citizens of old.
For an outsider this is quite an inside indictment. You guys take the image that is assumed worldwide of Americans as bloodyminded corporate sharks and makes us realise there is a heart beating as strong as the heart of the hippies of the 60's within America as a whole.
This is powerful stuff.
It deserves a much wider audience.
Superb political and socio-ecomomic commentary piece guys. !!
Blown away here.

[mattavelli]

hey, i just wanted to write about war ending in global destruction. thanks for reading, ANTO.