spotless mind

spotless mind

I felt the answers in the air letters of curvature

dancing calamities reach out

searchin smudged notes and remnants

memories wished for but never remembered

characters written from view

with effortless timing just before I reach you dear 

I stumble apon your carcass

a mound of recollection not recalled

and in a whisper you are gone and with you all your lies untold.

 

Reviews

[Marshall Hanson]

I like this piece. Very thought provoking. Now I can't wait to read the rest of your work.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a subtle almost gothic essence drawn through the pleats of this engaging poem~ well captured mood~