Midnight Flight

Clap to the beat of the thunder's roar
Clinch the lightening and feel the orgasm
As hail streams down entangled bodies
Our hearts beat in fear, excitement, and in ecstasy
The unknown waiting in our future's crying eyes
The dew on our skin says there's a new beginning
A chance to run naked on cotton candy clouds
Sinking in velvet feeling, cuddling cradle, and sweet sensation

Author's Note

I made some edits, let me know what you think

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to know freedom and no fear. When I was young. Good to test love and all things. I knew one day I would learn to stop being fearless. I like the flow of thoughts i the poem. No weakness in the amazing poem. Was a pleasure to read.
Coyote

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you!

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I love the concept of this piece. The fact that although uncertainty is a very frightful affair in life, it also makes life beautiful in a strange manner. Your imagery is also very captivating in this piece. Great write, dear friend.

-Cord

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is, some kinda, different. But i like it, it's so sensitive and i like the flow, and your choice of words, you put it in the right way. Wonderful.
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up :D

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you

[R.A. Youngblood]

You're welcome

[The Refined Poet]

this is a great poem. The word choice is perfect. It takes you on the emotional and mental journey as the "midnight flight" progresses. again, excellent.

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you!

[lee von cleef]

Wow the same backwards .Cowboy in me would try to "Cinch" the lightening,but clinch
is good, Sinking in velvet feeling,I don't like the word sinking, but do like the the feel of velvet you are trying to convey, " wrapped in velvet"? wrapped in velvet bedding ,?
future's crying eyes, smooth thought, ya I like it.

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you!

[afra]

wow i love it ...i always dreamed of running on cotton candy clouds ...well done

[Lily Mae]

I love the "unknown waiting in our futures crying eyes"... very passionate thoughts.. I think it's great and enjoyed it all..xo

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you!

[Dr. Wood ?]

really good this..moves at such pace and ends so softly....I may be wrong because American and English spelling does differ...but Lightning has no 'E'

[Freedom's Child]

I think your right thank you I will fix that!

[Baby Ricochet]

Cool. I like it. "A chance to run naked on cotton candy clouds" That's funny

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you!

[marlayesterday]

This is really good. I like the cotton candy clouds. And I like how it begins monstrous and loud, and ends so sweetly. Beautiful.

[Freedom's Child]

Thank you