Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Let me be

Let me be

A Poem by Freedom's Child

May I plead insanity
I could never see things as your lies say they are
From the time the cord was cut
This blood has been mine and only mine
I cannot fall in a line of masses with no thoughts
I will not hit a switch and told what to think
You will bleed all your blood before I take a seat
When you tell me who my family should be
My only vision is your face and a steady stream of blood
My favorite dream is when I stretch my hand down your throat with ripping
Searching to see if you really have a heart
Just know when you're on your knees gagging on your blood
I will be standing on your back tears flowing
Only from my laughter that I can not stop
Insane I may be
But have you seen your reality


© 2012 Freedom's Child


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Run away, run away, do not engage,dream a new dream, fine line reality and insanity,
you have deftly slammed your finger on the genetic hammer, they have come out with a new drug to scramble your D N A , so when springer calls , you've got plausible deniability .

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

Well said



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Strikes a terrible terror as i read through this a second time, an immense anger, a hatred best countered by words, hopefully .. not physical harm. You've certainly used phrases that could be evidence used against you if this were fact.

Amazing emotion created here .. a muddle of everything, everything in a mess.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well penned good point family sometimes the bane of life, very scary , I promise not to upset you any time soon.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

Thank you
extreme but i so agree with the insanity of reality, dancing on my kitchen table in agreement.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

Thank you
Run away, run away, do not engage,dream a new dream, fine line reality and insanity,
you have deftly slammed your finger on the genetic hammer, they have come out with a new drug to scramble your D N A , so when springer calls , you've got plausible deniability .

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

Well said
A direct poem. Honest and strong emotion. Sometime best to escape someone who create anger and insanity. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

thanks!
I cannot fall in a line of masses with no thoughts. Great line man. This is a really good one

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

thanks!

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Freedom's Child
Freedom's Child

Charlotte, NC



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I love the water, sailing, and dreaming of a better tomorrow. After living on a sailboat for 18 years, I moved in land and I continue to fight for the environment and those that cannot fight for thems.. more..

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