Magic

Magic

A Poem by Freedom's Child
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Just having fun with this one

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The magic I bring is in my words
I do not make rabbits disappear
But I can vanish your pain
I can not create illusions
But I can create a new beginning
I will not cut a person in two
But I can reshape reality
A magicians magic is temporary
Lyrics of mine will remain forever
I am a poet
Maker of dreams
Conqueror of nightmares
The creator of mystery

© 2012 Freedom's Child


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I congratulate you confident poet.
Each word in this piece is precious.
Hypocrites may not agree your point.
I am happy with your power as conqueror of nightmares.


Posted 11 Years Ago


'I will not cut a person in two ~ But i can reshape reality'

Start to finish wizardry; a softer, clearer piece of writing than others, yet, just as dramatic in its way .. '

Posted 12 Years Ago


the emotion sharing ,transfusion, contortionist ,oh ya good job...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
A most wonderful write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
"I am a poet
Maker of dreams
Conqueror of nightmares
The creator of mystery"
The above statements are the goal of all writers. Thank you for sharing the positive poem about writing. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
yeah, good, but could go further...We weave dreams and some of us might bring nightmares...The power of words knows no bounds...I suggest you have a little MORE fun with this

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

I will work on it, thank you
Cool

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Freedom's Child

12 Years Ago

thanks

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Freedom's Child
Freedom's Child

Charlotte, NC



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