Daddy's little boy

The dead kid's train is the station
Children are piled from end to end
Along the way some smacked the tracks
Bloody rusted tracks their bodies lay
They paid the toll before they came on board
Only to clear, the reasons they wanted to ride
The owner's cup is filled with blood
To toast the torture of his child's ride

Reviews

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Wow! Very very heavy, indeed! Stunning!

[Freedom's Child]

Thank You!

[lee von cleef]

I know , wish this guy would go away.I would slip in "at the station", Bloody...rusted
tracks....their bodies lay(this puts the focus on rusted tracks.Hay got to run .heavy poem.my kind ...

[Freedom's Child]

Thank You