Die with me

Die with me

A Poem by Freedom's Child
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It is actually a song I started to write but I like it better as a poem.

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Peace to come to me
Life is but a scheme
Swaying in the trees
Running from the bees

Die with me
Die with me

Soon to be a light
Breaking through the night
Playing with the dice
Screwing all the mice

Die with me
Die with me

Lighting hits the street
Come on feel the heat
Slip into my dream
Splitting at the seems

Die with me
Die with me

Waves are rushing in
No one here to sin
Sun about to burst
Be here till the hearse

Die with me
Die with me

© 2012 Freedom's Child


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The repetition is great,I don't like "life is but a scheme" It's to close to "life is just dream "for me.I am not sure what would replace it?

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Freedom's Child
Freedom's Child

Charlotte, NC



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I love the water, sailing, and dreaming of a better tomorrow. After living on a sailboat for 18 years, I moved in land and I continue to fight for the environment and those that cannot fight for thems.. more..

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