one touch

one touch can fulfill my dreams
so close, just inches away

all i could think was there was no way

but i am just unlucky me

so alas it wasn't to be

 

Author's Note

ignore grammar

Reviews

[BjH]

i ignore grammer
especially my own

be proud of this poem, i'm a big fan of the "short"
sometimes too many words say nothing
to the point is always best

benjamin

[Jessica Fox]

What an interesting poem, it can be taken into so many different contexts. Great work