I am the sorrow train

live in sorrow.

I board thousands of trains

and ride my desperate pains

and my cigarette clouds

one suitcase... i carry

it holds my lovers addresses

who yesterday were my lovers

my train passing in a hurry

folding the distances and meadows

gorging trees and lakes

where is my ticket

where is my next station

if there are any?!!

world hotels don't recognize me

nor my lovers' addresses

.................

I am sorrow train

without stations

my sations all far away

my stations all ran away

for ever..........ran away

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Reviews

[RedPoet]

This is really beautiful and sorrowful. Great imagery

[Haifa]

Seems to be sad but it's wonderful write here, really nice work. Keep it up and very well done.
Haifa

[Mauricio Montoya]

once the clouds expand to shed their tears, the sun will shine again.
Nice work.

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. dark and bleak ... and yet so haunting and beautiful ... can almost hear it like a song ...

[Wassim Ausem]

beautiful, simply beautiful and stunning. Indeed the sorrow train

[Requiem for a dream]

please write any review