The Red Wheelbarrow Poem

The Tick of Time

So much depends

upon

a clock forever

ticking

keeping the beat

tocking

keeping our lives

ticking

Reviews

[keaton Steele]

This poem is like really good

[Sekou]

This poem truly stands the test of time, and we will always remember Mason along with the greats, such as Donatello, Michelangelo, Leonardo, Raphael, and of course, their master, Splinter.

[avery]

i like the tic toc sounds bc it sounds like a clock and it's about a clock
but this is flawed bc time isn't real it's created in our minds
also death is inevitable life is desolate so we all shoukd give up