When All The Bombs Go Off

A bit of song lyrics I wrote. Inspired by someone else's poem on here, I forget which. I haven't finished it, of course. And I don't have a chorus yet. But still.

When all the bombs go off

We’ll jump into the void together

Love reflected in your eyes

Together we can watch that red sunrise

 

When all the bombs go off

And the sky is filled with suns

Our silhouettes will strike the hot midnight

We’ll be forever one

 

When all the bombs go off

We’ll fly into the abyss

We’ll leave the burning world behind us

Together we’ll leap into the blackness

 

When all the bombs go off

And the dream is destroyed

 We’ll get out of this hellhole, baby

You’ll be my lucky boy

 

When all the bombs go off

And the world turns into fire

We'll burn down together

Just like Fate always desired 

Author's Note

Any helpful criticism would be appreciated!

Reviews

[Starry Eyed]

I dont think anything's wrong with it, very enjoyable to read. :) thanks for sharing.
Dani